Friday, November 05, 2010

教nornor English Writing (6): Let's write then

我当即趁热打铁, 说:how about we do it now? You and I each write a paragraph asking people to vote for you or me to be the president.

儿子很兴奋地立马去写了。开天辟地第一回儿,没有上厕所,就写完了下面一段。 (真实复述。拼写错误全是他的原版,我没做任何改动。)

Hello, my name is Justin. I want you to vote for me as presedent. I wil help the poor, and help oder and younger people. I'd try to help states to recover from tornadoes, typhoons, and huracanes. I'll give huge presents for the best educational public school. I would also help stop bed bug invasion. I'll stop wars and make peace and talk to them instead of fight and cause a war. I can run places well because I been governor (presend) and everybody likes me. Thats why I think you should vote for me.

公平起见, 我自己也写了一篇:
Do you care about your children’s future? Do you want our country to prosper? If you answer yes to any of these questions, please vote for me to be the next president. I am committed to serve our country and I am able to give you the answer. Growing up in my family’s farm, I learned hard working and responsibilities at an early age. Going through public schools and earning a highest degree in education, I developed curiosity, understanding, and love of our society. Working as a business professor in the past twenty years, I taught our young citizens the fundamentals of economic development, capability building, and service to the nation. Bing a small business owner at the same time, I practiced what I teach and participated in the everyday excitement of our country’s growth. If elected, I will use my experiences to strengthen education, develop the economy, and secure our country’s future. It is the answer you are looking for. Why wait? Vote for me now.

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